My World

Some great senses writing today.


We based it on a model of a My World Poem

My World

I like the smell of hot tarmac when the sun is blazing,

Candyfloss twisting on a stick,

School dinners when I haven't had breakfast!

I like the taste of a sweet mango that has been kept cool in the fridge,

Hot sundae sauce on ice cream,

Sherbet lemons fizzing in my mouth.

anon

Can you comment and explain what the yellow and pink are showing?